LG:To be able to persuade others to our point-of-view through writing

SOS:Hook in the audience.

Use persuasive sentence starters and words.

Rules, Rules, Rules?

Rules, rules, rules why do we need them? There is a new rule that clearly states that SPS students need to be home by 7 pm. This makes me mad! We should not have to be home by 7 pm.

I strongly disagree with this rule because if you went to a family party you wouldn't be able to stay because it will go past 7 pm. Whats the point of even going then?

In my opinion, you won't be able to go to your own team practice. Your coach works through the day and finishes at night.There will be no time to do practice before 7 pm and that won't be any fun.

lastly, you wouldn't  be able to go to your dad's rugby.My dad is my role model I shouldn't have to miss out on that. This shouldn't happen to us if I was in charge I wouldn't do this to you.

I hope my advice has persuaded you that we should not be home by 7 pm.

by Masyn Austin