LG:To be able to persuade others to our point-of-view through writing

SOS:Hook in the audience.

Use persuasive sentence starters and words.

To Mr Dingle

In my opinion reading is making all our lives miserable. Drawing is fun more interesting and way more awesome.  

99% of us love drawing the remaining 1% likes reading. That 1% is you Mr Dingle! We all know that drawing is way better.

I believe we read enough during the day. In the majority of all our subject we read and it's not fun !

Finally, Mr Dingle it would mean the world if you let us draw instead of reading. I know you like drawing. We do to! Why don't you let us draw instead of reading.

by Adelaide Petrie

LG:To be able to persuade others to our point-of-view through writing

SOS:Hook in the audience.

Use persuasive sentence starters and words.

STOP LITTERING!!!

Pak ‘N’ Save in my opinion rubbish is everywhere. It is not just on the ground but it is deep, deep down in the soil.

Did you know that in a year hundreds of people have littered plastic bags everywhere. This clearly shows that we need to step up and stop littering.

I strongly believe that if plastic bags are banned then we wont have animals dying and suffering of rubbish being around their necks and in their bellies.

I believe that we should put a stop to littering. It is really bad for our environment and can kill many wildlife species.We should put a stop to littering right now.

By Brianna Jury.

LG:To be able to persuade others to our point-of-view through writing

SOS:Hook in the audience.

Use persuasive sentence starters and words.

Rules, Rules, Rules?

Rules, rules, rules why do we need them? There is a new rule that clearly states that SPS students need to be home by 7 pm. This makes me mad! We should not have to be home by 7 pm.

I strongly disagree with this rule because if you went to a family party you wouldn't be able to stay because it will go past 7 pm. Whats the point of even going then?

In my opinion, you won't be able to go to your own team practice. Your coach works through the day and finishes at night.There will be no time to do practice before 7 pm and that won't be any fun.

lastly, you wouldn't  be able to go to your dad's rugby.My dad is my role model I shouldn't have to miss out on that. This shouldn't happen to us if I was in charge I wouldn't do this to you.

I hope my advice has persuaded you that we should not be home by 7 pm.

by Masyn Austin